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January 30, 2014
Brain Freeze by MiniJacksonDiAngelo We have all been here, but not so elegantly as this.
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Literature Text
Apple, ice-cream, grape, cherry
All safely enveloped in-
ahydrochloricacidbox
Swirling and curling
Crushing the artery, and freezing the brain
Brain
Freeze
Inch by inch
Morph the organ
To frozen H2O - - -
And then shatter
Into a million tiny pieces
Each warping to its’ own
Multidimensionalvortex
A whirling mass of fluidity
That wanderlusts the most
And leaves me gasping.
ahydrochloricacidbox
Swirling and curling
Crushing the artery, and freezing the brain
Brain
Freeze
Inch by inch
Morph the organ
To frozen H2O - - -
And then shatter
Into a million tiny pieces
Each warping to its’ own
Multidimensionalvortex
A whirling mass of fluidity
That wanderlusts the most
And leaves me gasping.
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Literature
defeathered
and this is where we bury our hearts,
between self-defeating personality disorders
and burnt bridges and midnight ramblings
we promise ourselves aren’t true;
embedding our memories in forsaken homes
like it is a conscious decision to shed
our wings (reptiles don’t fly)
and maybe I am the monster of every
myth: wide-eyed and jagged toothed and
looking to regain a piece of myself the
world borrowed, many moons ago
as I falter and stumble over my own unaware
feet, wreaking havoc, reeking of self-acquittal--
all I ever wanted to do was belong.
dreams are flaws much like the hearts we
flaunt on our sleeves, and I seem to
have len
Literature
Ice Cream
Everyone writes poems about emotions and fears
And one day I said, "I want to write a poem about
Ice cream."
About Dilly Bars on the drive from Tucson to Phoenix
The Dairy Queen across the highway from the ostrich farm
With the dust devil's raging by
About soft serve cones at the Desert Museum
Always Twist. Never Vanilla.
On all those hot Saturday afternoons
Watching mountain goats sleep in the shade
A poem about Friday nights after pizza
A different flavor every time
And eating straight from the carton at Dad's
While netflix plays on the wii
And sitting on the rooftop watching the stars
Ice cream bar in hand
About the store by Big Lake
W
Literature
Don't Step
Don’t step to me
I may wear a frilly pink skirt, but I will TAKE YOU in a fight.
Not even because I’m angry, I could just use the exercise
In humility, so throw me your best haymaker, and I’ll take it, because I’ve never had a bone too beautiful to break it. No, throw me to the ground and I’ll memorise the sound because it’s profound that you think your pride can push ME around.
They say words are the way to make a man break. But while you’re focussed on finding a phrase to prove your ego more great, you won’t see my hands palming your hate. Making mental memos of words, mementos of the curse.
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You deserve the DD for this one.I personally found it cute, honest, a bit on the funny side, and even tangibly unique for the simple reason that its straightforward. Its a well written piece frankly speaking, and I don't have much to critique or comment on it. Its straightforward and it does the job well.
do keep writing.