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My Valentine

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Literature Text

Little fluttering hearts
Falling from the sky
Cupid shooting arrows

Why do you miss mine?

Red lipstick and red dresses
Shy hands reaching forward
Curious kisses and touches

Will you be my Valentine?
So, in accordance to Valentine's Day, this short poem :3

Hope you like, seemed too...mushy, idk.

Should I use another word for 'red' or should it stay like that cause I like that simplicity in it?

Improvements in the first stanza?

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comatose-comet's avatar
This is super-late but this is super-lovely, I like the simplicity or red being repeated, makes it feel like you are talking to someone :heart: well done! :love: